I wish I could write more often. I’ve been trying to build a schedule that makes that possible, but work has been incredibly all-consuming.

  Now that I’m getting back into the story, my main focus is revision — especially tightening the prose and reducing the info-dumps.

  I’m also seriously considering switching the story to third-person POV. Because the narrative involves frequent POV shifts, I think third person would handle that structure more smoothly. It would give the story better flexibility and consistency.

  Another reason for the change is that I want to relearn how to properly write in first-person POV. I’ve realized that I often blur the line between first-person narration and stream-of-consciousness, which weakens clarity and control. Moving this story to third person would let me avoid that pitfall her.

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  I wish I could write more often. I’ve been trying to build a schedule that makes that possible, but work has been incredibly all-consuming.

  Now that I’m getting back into the story, my main focus is revision — especially tightening the prose and reducing the info-dumps.

  I’m also seriously considering switching the story to third-person POV. Because the narrative involves frequent POV shifts, I think third person would handle that structure more smoothly. It would give the story better flexibility and consistency.

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  Another reason for the change is that I want to relearn how to properly write in first-person POV. I’ve realized that I often blur the line between first-person narration and stream-of-consciousness, which weakens clarity and control. Moving this story to third person would let me avoid that pitfall her.

  I wish I could write more often. I’ve been trying to build a schedule that makes that possible, but work has been incredibly all-consuming.

  Now that I’m getting back into the story, my main focus is revision — especially tightening the prose and reducing the info-dumps.

  I’m also seriously considering switching the story to third-person POV. Because the narrative involves frequent POV shifts, I think third person would handle that structure more smoothly. It would give the story better flexibility and consistency.

  Another reason for the change is that I want to relearn how to properly write in first-person POV. I’ve realized that I often blur the line between first-person narration and stream-of-consciousness, which weakens clarity and control. Moving this story to third person would let me avoid that pitfall her.

  I wish I could write more often. I’ve been trying to build a schedule that makes that possible, but work has been incredibly all-consuming.

  Now that I’m getting back into the story, my main focus is revision — especially tightening the prose and reducing the info-dumps.

  I’m also seriously considering switching the story to third-person POV. Because the narrative involves frequent POV shifts, I think third person would handle that structure more smoothly. It would give the story better flexibility and consistency.

  Another reason for the change is that I want to relearn how to properly write in first-person POV. I’ve realized that I often blur the line between first-person narration and stream-of-consciousness, which weakens clarity and control. Moving this story to third person would let me avoid that pitfall her.