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Chapter 3 : Below the Surface

  They walked in silence.

  Red had been told to follow the tall one — the strange, towering figure who’d said nothing but moved with purpose, like some ancient creature pulled from the depths of a forgotten world.

  He obeyed, curiosity outweighing caution.

  The tunnel was narrow, barely wide enough for Red to move without brushing the damp walls.

  For the tall boy, it was worse.

  He had to crouch deeply, his knees almost to his chest, long arms dangling awkwardly as he shuffled forward. His shoulders scraped against the curved ceiling. Pipes groaned above. Dust fell in soft whispers.

  Red followed close, his grip still tight on the stick — an automatic gesture.

  Being cautious was a habit now, wired into him.

  But beneath that, something else was building.

  Curiosity.

  A quiet feeling that, for the first time, he might be exactly where he was supposed to be.

  His ribs ached where the kick had landed, and his jaw throbbed from the punch.

  But he didn’t complain.

  He endured it, quietly.

  Pain wasn’t new.

  If anything, it reminded him that he was still alive — and still learning.

  How much stronger is Bully, really? he thought.

  How far do I still have to go to catch up?

  Then the tall boy stopped.

  Without warning, he twisted around and dropped low, bringing his long face inches from Red’s.

  The suddenness of it made Red tense — not in fear, but in readiness.

  His instincts kicked up, only to pause at what came next.

  “Ha—he—hii—” he blurted, voice strange and uneven, like someone whose thoughts were rushing ahead of their tongue.

  “I forgot to introduce myself.”

  His glasses — thick, heavy, the kind that distorted your eyes if you looked straight into them — slipped slightly on his nose. The strap holding them in place stretched tight against his temple.

  “My name is Ordo. Or I should say… that’s what I’ve been called… as far as I can remember.”

  He glanced quickly at Red’s hand — the one still gripping the sharpened stick — then back up, as if he hadn’t noticed anything at all.

  No fear.

  No comment.

  Just a flicker of awareness, buried beneath that blank, unreadable face.

  He blinked, tapped the side of his head with two fingers — not adjusting his glasses but more like trying to reset something.

  Then, just as suddenly, he turned and continued moving as if he hadn’t spoken at all.

  Red followed.

  But part of him remained on edge.

  He liked this place so far — or at least, he liked what it might become.

  But liking something didn’t mean trusting it.

  Then came a loud bang — something hitting metal.

  A pause.

  “Oh… heee yes. The door.”

  A screeching sound followed, like a rusted valve being turned.

  Then the pull of something heavy — a metal door dragging across cement.

  As it opened, light crept in.

  Orange.

  Not firelight — electrical, but soft.

  When the door finally groaned open, they stepped into something enormous.

  They were standing on a ledge — a balcony — with stairs curling down on both sides.

  Red froze.

  His eyes widened, unblinking — like he’d just stepped into a dream he wasn’t prepared to have.

  He looked shocked, caught off guard by the scale of what lay before him.

  It didn’t feel like Gordonville.

  It didn’t feel like anything he’d ever seen.

  Before them: a massive cement chamber.

  It stretched deep and wide and high, like an underground fortress.

  Tents covered the floor below — square, triangular, round — arranged like a village.

  Not chaos.

  Order.

  People moved between them.

  Talking.

  Training.

  Cleaning.

  Cooking.

  The air was filled with sound, but not noise.

  The smell of food drifted up — something like stew and herbs, though Red didn’t know what it was.

  Ordo hadn’t said a word, but he was watching Red’s reaction.

  Like always.

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  Then, as they stepped forward, he spoke — as if snapped out of a trance:

  “Let’s go. I’ll show you how things work down here.”

  Red floated down the stairs.

  He had never felt this way — surprise, impatience, curiosity stronger than caution.

  Still, he stayed alert.

  Nothing this good came without a price.

  The people here were awake.

  Fit.

  Kids.

  Adolescents.

  Young adults.

  All having a purpose.

  Doing something with conviction.

  Red kept looking.

  Boys.

  Young men.

  That was all he saw.

  No girls.

  No women.

  He said nothing.

  But he noticed.

  They looked as though they expected him.

  Not staring — but acknowledging his presence.

  A warrior’s glance:

  I see you.

  Ordo nodded back at them as he walked.

  “Here, there is order,” he said.

  “Never take action against anyone or touch what isn’t yours — unless you’re told to by your leader.”

  He looked at Red.

  “You already proved you belong here. Now you earn. None of this is free. But follow instructions, and it’ll be easy for you. Let me show you your place.”

  His pace increased.

  He moved like a tall tree walking over people.

  Red had to focus not to lose him.

  They passed tents and paths.

  Red wanted to explore everything — but now wasn’t the time.

  He pushed it down.

  He had to keep up.

  As he followed, he nodded back at the looks — trying not to seem weak, or rude.

  It felt like a custom down here.

  A silent ritual.

  In his old world, he would’ve done the same — except in reverse.

  He would’ve looked, yes, but only from behind something.

  A corner.

  A broken wall.

  He’d study the newcomer without ever being seen.

  Here, they looked at you like it was normal.

  Like you were supposed to be seen.

  Ordo suddenly slowed and stopped.

  He looked left.

  Then right.

  Like he didn’t know where he was going.

  Then turned to Red, confused.

  “Oh… hee… yess. Let’s go this way.”

  They reached a green square tent with a rectangular flap.

  Inside: a single army-style bed, clothes folded on it.

  A desk.

  A cupboard.

  Red spun, trying to take it all in.

  And saw Ordo staring at him.

  “This is your place,” Ordo said quickly, almost like he just remembered he was supposed to say it.

  “Your room. Or quarter. Whatever you wanna call it.”

  Then Ordo turned again.

  They moved on.

  Next stop: a larger tent.

  It was dim inside.

  Quieter.

  A few people sat, fully focused.

  “Do you know what this place is?” Ordo asked.

  Red didn’t have the word.

  But he knew the feeling.

  Books.

  He remembered the first book he ever found — half-buried in a pile of wet clothes behind a collapsed wall.

  He had held it like it was treasure.

  The pages were torn, the words meant nothing, but it felt like something.

  He always felt different after flipping through books — like each one gave him a new piece of himself.

  Something hidden.

  Something that stayed.

  “They’re books?” he asked.

  “I’ve seen some.”

  Ordo nodded.

  Then tapped the side of his head like before.

  “This is a library. My favorite place. This is where I sharpen my only valuable weapon... my brain. Red, do you know how to read?”

  Red looked down, discouraged.

  “No,” he said quietly.

  “But I wish I did.”

  Ordo looked panicked for a second, then hopeful.

  “Don’t worry. You will. Soon enough.”

  He rushed toward a shelf, grabbed two books and a device, shoved them into a bag.

  “We need to move. There’s more I’d like to show you before calling it a day.”

  They moved again.

  Red saw people stitching clothes, forging tools, sharpening blades.

  He saw a gathering — a small group seated in formation, listening to someone who looked like a leader.

  Focused.

  Silent.

  Ready for battle.

  It reminded him of Bully and his Rats.

  There must be several groups like this down here, he thought — different units, different leaders. Maybe even different rules.

  They kept moving.

  Then the atmosphere shifted.

  People were heading toward the same place.

  Ordo moved through them — like this was his zone.

  Ahead: a ring.

  Two fighters.

  Gloves.

  Headgear.

  They moved fast.

  Clean.

  Strong.

  Red was transfixed.

  This was another level of fighting.

  Speed.

  Precision.

  Endurance.

  Reflexes.

  Class.

  They moved like emotionless warriors — machines made for violence.

  Red had trained in scraps and shadows, dreaming of getting stronger… but he hadn’t even known fighters like this existed.

  This was the level he wanted to reach.

  Ordo saw it.

  “As much as I feel at home in the library… I have a feeling you’ll spend a lot of time here.”

  He smiled.

  “There’s more. Follow me.”

  Red kept looking back until they passed the crowd.

  Next, they passed people training — sparring, boxing, working with sticks and wooden blades.

  Some jumped rope.

  Others shadowboxed.

  All of them looked lethal.

  Ordo:

  “This is where you’ll start training. As soon as tomorrow. From what I’ve seen, you have it in you. You belong with these fighters. Still, come humbly. These boys are nothing to play with. But I think you already know that.”

  He looked at Red from head to toe.

  “And now it’s time for you to have a real meal. You need it.”

  Red still watched the fighters, eyes hungry.

  “Hi-hee-hoo,” Ordo said gently. “You’ll have all the time in the world to be here. But not on an empty stomach. Let’s go.”

  They walked to a wide tent filled with long tables.

  People ate in silence, calmly.

  Not because they were quiet — but because they were recovering.

  It felt like the end of a long day, like the food was there to restore something spent.

  To refill whatever energy had been poured into training, tasks, or something harder to name.

  Like they were fueling up for the next round of whatever came next.

  Ordo asked someone for a plate.

  A boy brought one over and handed it to Ordo — but Ordo tilted his head toward Red.

  The boy gave it to him instead.

  “This is where food is served to those who deserve it. Do your part, and you’ll never be hungry again.”

  Ordo paused, glancing at Red with something close to thoughtfulness.

  It’s probably his first real meal in a long time, he thought.

  Better he eats in privacy.

  Let him enjoy it without eyes on him.

  He gestured for Red to follow as they walked to the edge of the cafeteria — a quiet corner that overlooked another stretch of tents below.

  From here, the entire underground village seemed to stretch out endlessly, layered in rows and paths like a hidden city.

  Then Ordo spoke again:

  “You’ve seen the main places. The one where you’ll spend most of your time. Showers, toilets — I’m sure you’ll find them by yourself. People can help, if you know how to ask… and don’t become a burden to anyone.”

  Ordo thought to himself: The boy already knows this. Look at him. He’s a survivor.

  “Now I gotta leave,” he said aloud. “There are other things that need my presence.”

  “Can you find your way back to your tent?”

  Red nodded.

  Ordo walked away — not like a boy, not like a leader.

  Like a spirit going off to haunt someone else.

  And yet, for all his awkwardness, he wasn’t blind.

  He knew Bully.

  Knew that look in his eyes.

  And he’d seen it land on Red.

  Something had started — not loud, not defined.

  Just a shift in weight.

  A tilt in the current.

  Ordo didn’t say anything.

  He never did when it mattered most.

  But deep down, he knew.

  This boy wasn’t just passing through.

  He was going to matter.

  He was what they had been missing.

  The last piece — for a goal they hadn’t even dared to name out loud.

  Red watched him for a moment, then gave a slow, subtle nod — part approval, part admiration — before turning away.

  He didn’t know how long it took him to return.

  Time didn’t matter.

  Everything he saw on the way back was more interesting than anything he had ever seen above.

  He finally reached his tent.

  For a moment, he stood outside, just staring at it.

  He had seen it earlier, but now it felt different.

  Like something was waiting for him inside.

  He stepped in.

  Slowly.

  Quietly.

  His eyes moved across everything — the bed, the desk, the folded clothes, the cupboard.

  He placed the plate on the desk.

  The hunger was still there, but he had almost forgotten it.

  The adrenaline of the day was still pumping through him.

  This place, this world… it had taken over his senses.

  He touched the desk.

  Sat on the bed.

  Got back up.

  Opened the cupboard.

  Closed it again.

  Was he dreaming?

  Then he saw it — the bag.

  The one Ordo had packed.

  Sitting on the bed like it had been there forever.

  Red turned and looked over his shoulder, half-expecting to see Ordo lurking in the shadows.

  Nothing.

  He was alone.

  And yet… not quite.

  Above the camp, behind a pane of glass, Bully stood with his arms crossed.

  He didn’t speak right away.

  His eyes followed the boy below — the new one.

  Red.

  He didn’t want to say anything.

  Not yet.

  Not about him.

  But silence, in this place, could be dangerous.

  “We’ve got another one,” he said finally, his voice steady but low.

  “He’s raw… but he moves like he’s built for this.”

  A pause.

  “Fast. Sharp. Like it’s in his blood.”

  He stopped there — didn’t say the rest.

  Didn’t say special.

  Didn’t say different.

  Behind him, in the shadows, stood a taller figure.

  Older.

  Unmoving.

  His face lost in the dark.

  “Take him with you on your next mission,” the voice said.

  Calm.

  Controlled.

  “Let’s test your instincts.”

  A breath.

  “If you’re right… the boy might be valuable.”

  Bully nodded.

  Mechanical.

  Like a soldier following protocol.

  Then turned and walked toward the door.

  As it closed behind him, the mask dropped.

  He looked older.

  He looked tired.

  Like someone who didn’t want to turn this one into what the others had become.

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